She was a star in her own eyes,
The world thought of her as different.
Although, she loved the attention,
She still craved some more drama.
She had big dreams and bigger brain power.
She wanted to drive the world,
But missed having any influential acquaintances.
She started young,
Following her dad's footsteps.
She moved fast and upwards always,
Towards the tricks of the trade.
To some she was inconvenience,
To some, a friend
Did she actually like the peace?
Or was she enjoying the futuristic riot?
She could be iconic, one would add
Only sometimes, turning into a complete ball of mess.
It was arduous for the world to figure her out,
Some said 'the spoilt one'
Some called her 'the heiress'
Others said she was frenzied,
But to us, she was interim madness!
We would love to wait,
For the real name to pop,
Until she made it big,
Or to gaze into,
Whether she took the drop.
P.S- Inspired by 'Inventing Anna'
It's wonderful Sabreen Maam,You wrote,what is true. I hope this poetry may change someone's mindset. Many females still face lots of objections in each and every phase of their life. What you wrote is incredible!! 👏👏 Keep it up ma'am ❤
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading Paridhi. Appreciate your thoughts!
DeleteInventing Sabreen! New blog..new thought
ReplyDeleteThat certainly brought a wide smile on my face. Thanks Jeevak :)
DeleteThis is the best character based poem I have read in a long time and so thought provoking.
ReplyDeleteThanks my constant :)
DeleteYour poems relates to the life of ordinary people which is a great thing ♡´･ᴗ･`♡I literally could relate to this poem in my life ❤keep shinning
ReplyDeleteThanks so much 😊
DeleteVery thoughtful representing women.keep up the good work.keep writing.
ReplyDeleteThanks for always reading my work and feedback 😀
DeleteBeautiful!!
ReplyDeleteThanks partner 😘
DeleteAmazing Sabreen ba😍
ReplyDeleteHumbled and grateful 🙏
DeleteAmazing. Inspirational and close to reality
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :)
DeleteLoved it. Such a strong character.
ReplyDeleteAppreciate you reading and your feedback. Thank you!
DeleteBeautiful and deep lines 😊 her soul will reveal her character, so much worthy not to be in anybody's capability to judge.
ReplyDeleteVery humbled to hear this :) Thank you
DeleteGreat work!
ReplyDeleteLoved the lines ' It was arduous for the world to figure her out,
Some said 'the spoilt one'
Some called her 'the heiress'
Others said she was frenzied,
But to us, she was interim madness!
Thank you so much! Please reveal you name :)
Deletewonderful choice of words. nice way of portraying chaos as an individual with its own feelings. keep writing more :)
ReplyDeleteThank you. Appreciate you reading it :)
DeleteBeautifully narrated.👏👏
ReplyDeleteThank you for always appreciating my attempts!
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